This is a rushed and incomplete document. Although potentially it could be laid out well, you did not go into enough detail. To improve, you need to refer more closely to how the case study local magazine (Pretty Litter) has informed your decisions about cost estimates in Brighton to show that you have really read and understood this information. Add more detail about expected procedures to make the document more convincing. Correct all spelling/grammatical errors, keeping a professional tone in writing.
This is a rushed and incomplete document. Although potentially it could be laid out well, you did not go into enough detail. To improve, you need to refer more closely to how the case study local magazine (Pretty Litter) has informed your decisions about cost estimates in Brighton to show that you have really read and understood this information. Add more detail about expected procedures to make the document more convincing. Correct all spelling/grammatical errors, keeping a professional tone in writing.
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